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Dying in Dallas – Chapter 2

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Chapter 1

Chapter 2 – I Just Can’t Catch a Break

72 Hours and 30 Minutes

(11:30 p.m. Friday)

I walked out of the bathroom, putting one foot carefully in front of the other and fighting the odd tilt of the floor that I hadn’t noticed earlier. Grace watched me leave without comment. I passed a group of beautiful people who I was sure had never been told they didn’t belong in a place like this. Marek was standing at my vacated barstool and didn’t so much as glance in my direction as I left the nightclub. He and Grace would probably have a good laugh at my expense later tonight. 

I paused in the hotel hallway to get my bearings. When I leaned against a wall to steady myself, a crushing wave of self-pity with a strong undertow of loneliness threatened to swamp me. Here I was, minutes away from turning thirty, with every penny I had sunk into a business that might never open. I couldn’t stand up to another woman in a bar bathroom and, for the life of me, I couldn’t get laid. Another thing I couldn’t do was spend the night in this hotel by myself. I would be miserable when I woke up tomorrow morning and had to do the walk of shame home. Only my shame was that I couldn’t find a man to spend the night with. 

Screw my stuff upstairs. I checked my watch. The numbers swam, but I had enough time to make it back to The Madam before I turned thirty at midnight. Hell, since I’d only had one of my two drinks, I could afford to treat myself to a taxi. I turned resolutely toward the lobby, but had to put a hand on the wall to keep from falling down. 

Damn! Foiled again! Grace O’Malley was standing between me and the lobby, staring at me with a fierce scowl. Apparently, she intended to follow me to my hotel room and tuck me in. 

“Grace!” The friendly greeting hailed from behind her. 

I was stunned by the sight of the man walking towards us, a broad smile on his face. A smile that froze as quickly as a rabbit caught in a cobra’s stare when he saw me. I wouldn’t normally consider myself a cobra, but this man had sat in my home just two days ago, supposedly to help me get my business open. Now he was having chummy late-night meetings with the people throwing up all the roadblocks? If I hadn’t been so woozy, I might have felt a little venomous. 

I didn’t know who was more shocked: Grace O’Malley or Dallas City Council member Austin Crockett. Me? I wasn’t that shocked. I had known all along that someone powerful must be behind my problems opening The Whine Barrel. I had been shocked when Council Member Crockett, with his too-wide politician’s smile, expensive suits, and haircut—not to mention his rugged good-ole-boy good looks—swooped in from out of nowhere to help “our poor little widow.” I hadn’t wanted to look a gift horse in the mouth, but his help had seemed a little too good to be true.

“I’ve told you never to come here.” With one last look over her shoulder at me, O’Malley grabbed Crockett by the arm and practically dragged him back towards the lobby.

Exhaustion and sadness washed over me. I couldn’t think about this tonight. More than anything, I wanted to be in my own bed, curled up with my sweet pit bull Bo. I wouldn’t even begrudge her stealing the covers like she always did. 

Now that I couldn’t leave the hotel through the lobby, I would have to find another way. I turned and saw an exit sign floating over a door. I was a little fuzzy on the layout of the hotel (I seemed to be fuzzy on a lot of stuff tonight), but I thought it opened to the street out front. 

No one was in the hall to see the drunk girl stagger along the wall and then practically fall out the exit door. 

An exit door that clanged shut behind me, stranding me in a creepy parking lot on the wrong side of the hotel.

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Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: Good read I enjoyed reading Cheese Louise. It is a fun murder mystery that keeps you entertained and wondering who the killer is. There are many suspects in the book, but the real killer is not who you thought it would be. Ms Keough, the author, has a way of writing that makes you hate to put her book down. I hope to read more books from her in the future.
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Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: Fun story! So much fun to read about familiar Dallas locations and neighborhoods. Add in the new (to me) witchy facts, lovable characters, larger than life cat, for an easy to read caper.I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!
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Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: An excellent Summer Read!!! I couldn't wait for this book to come out! I read the prequel, Follow, Follow Brie, and it was excellent. It is well written and humorous with a surprise ending, which made me excited for the next book in the series., The setting is in the Dallas, Texas area and I just love Keough's word choice that takes me back to Texas! Very authentic! Cheese Louise picks up the storyline, a few years later, and I still love characters, suspense, and surprises. This is a great summer read.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Drama, Intrigue and humor I love how this author writes a story of intrigue, with unexpected humor thrown in. I also love wine and dogs and since they play a major part in the story, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to more from this author.
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Lynne Fiske
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Great read Loved that it was set in Dallas, with name changes. The vampires were so interesting, I could hardly put the book down. Looking forward to her next book.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Laramie is growing. I can't say it was bigger in Texas but it was a different story. The book can standalone. The ending was brutal with punished betrayal. I'm not sure I agreed with the punishment since she gives others far more leeway. The people she should be avoiding, her Mom and sister, she doesn't. There is nothing funny in the abuse she takes from them. And no, there is no way a Mom who loved her would act like that. Laramie is developing into more of a person though still naïve with tendencies that could drive anyone away. The friends she has are great, what an odd assortment of known and unknown. I'm looking forward to seeing what the next book brings.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): The Blood Will Tell said it all Such a fun read! While I don't suggest skipping the first book of the chronicles (Dying in Dallas), you will still enjoy "The Blood Will Tell" even if you didn't. Much like our vampire host, Laramie, our author J.C. Keough has found her pulse and keeps you reading.Keough did a beautiful job of recapping the first book, for those who haven't read it, while inviting you to a Halloween party at her mansion, The Madam. All of the characters come to life and you are drawn in to the party along with the other guests of cheating spouses, family drama, questionable friends and vampires in disguise who crash the party. You sympathize with Laramie as she tries to find love again and figure out who are friends and foes.Make sure to have a bottle of wine handy, as it is flows throughout the party, and your dog close by as dogs are always welcomed at The Madam.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): The perfect amount of twists and turns... The Whine Barrel, located in the beautiful Victorian home owned by Laramie Harper, is just about ready to open for business. Laramie has decided to throw a Halloween party to entice guests to her new business in the hopes of attracting future business. The party appears to be a smashing success with costumed party goers, pint sized ghosts, and of course - vampires. Things are finally going Laramie’s way.....or are they? This novella was a joy to read with just enough twists and turns to keep you wanting more without being confusing. I can’t wait for the next installation in the Laramie Harper chronicles.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): A Halloween party that doesn’t disappoint! Just finished the novella, The Blood Will Tell, and I throughly enjoyed it! I love the way J. C. Keough has written the character Laramie. I feel like Laramie is a dear friend, and we are having a girlfriends talk session and catching up. Laramie is the owner of a wonderful turn of the century home, known as the Madam. This is Halloween, so Laramie is throwing a costume party. Expect the unexpected and you won’t be disappointed!Great job! I am hooked and can’t wait to find out what Laramie does next.
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The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Frightfully delightful Laramie is back in a short for her First Halloween in The Madam ( her home and business). After the recent murder that took place in her home, she hoping free wine and candy will draw in the community and help erase all the negativity it’s brought. All is going well until it’s not. You can’t help love Laramie and her heart of gold but chaos follows her where ever she goes. A great short story with a heartbreaking twist that takes place two weeks after book one Dying in Dallas. A quick read totally worth reading!!!

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Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: Good read I enjoyed reading Cheese Louise. It is a fun murder mystery that keeps you entertained and wondering who the killer is. There are many suspects in the book, but the real killer is not who you thought it would be. Ms Keough, the author, has a way of writing that makes you hate to put her book down. I hope to read more books from her in the future.
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Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: Fun story! So much fun to read about familiar Dallas locations and neighborhoods. Add in the new (to me) witchy facts, lovable characters, larger than life cat, for an easy to read caper.I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!
Posted on Amazon Amazon
Joleta Gallozzi profile picture
Joleta Gallozzi
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
Cheese Louise: Cheese Louise Cozy Mystery Book One: An excellent Summer Read!!! I couldn't wait for this book to come out! I read the prequel, Follow, Follow Brie, and it was excellent. It is well written and humorous with a surprise ending, which made me excited for the next book in the series., The setting is in the Dallas, Texas area and I just love Keough's word choice that takes me back to Texas! Very authentic! Cheese Louise picks up the storyline, a few years later, and I still love characters, suspense, and surprises. This is a great summer read.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
P. Floresca profile picture
P. Floresca
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Drama, Intrigue and humor I love how this author writes a story of intrigue, with unexpected humor thrown in. I also love wine and dogs and since they play a major part in the story, I really enjoyed this book and look forward to more from this author.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
Lynne Fiske profile picture
Lynne Fiske
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Great read Loved that it was set in Dallas, with name changes. The vampires were so interesting, I could hardly put the book down. Looking forward to her next book.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
Dagnbit profile picture
Dagnbit
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Laramie is growing. I can't say it was bigger in Texas but it was a different story. The book can standalone. The ending was brutal with punished betrayal. I'm not sure I agreed with the punishment since she gives others far more leeway. The people she should be avoiding, her Mom and sister, she doesn't. There is nothing funny in the abuse she takes from them. And no, there is no way a Mom who loved her would act like that. Laramie is developing into more of a person though still naïve with tendencies that could drive anyone away. The friends she has are great, what an odd assortment of known and unknown. I'm looking forward to seeing what the next book brings.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
robert hinojo profile picture
robert hinojo
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): The Blood Will Tell said it all Such a fun read! While I don't suggest skipping the first book of the chronicles (Dying in Dallas), you will still enjoy "The Blood Will Tell" even if you didn't. Much like our vampire host, Laramie, our author J.C. Keough has found her pulse and keeps you reading.Keough did a beautiful job of recapping the first book, for those who haven't read it, while inviting you to a Halloween party at her mansion, The Madam. All of the characters come to life and you are drawn in to the party along with the other guests of cheating spouses, family drama, questionable friends and vampires in disguise who crash the party. You sympathize with Laramie as she tries to find love again and figure out who are friends and foes.Make sure to have a bottle of wine handy, as it is flows throughout the party, and your dog close by as dogs are always welcomed at The Madam.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
C Smith profile picture
C Smith
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): The perfect amount of twists and turns... The Whine Barrel, located in the beautiful Victorian home owned by Laramie Harper, is just about ready to open for business. Laramie has decided to throw a Halloween party to entice guests to her new business in the hopes of attracting future business. The party appears to be a smashing success with costumed party goers, pint sized ghosts, and of course - vampires. Things are finally going Laramie’s way.....or are they? This novella was a joy to read with just enough twists and turns to keep you wanting more without being confusing. I can’t wait for the next installation in the Laramie Harper chronicles.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
C Walker profile picture
C Walker
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): A Halloween party that doesn’t disappoint! Just finished the novella, The Blood Will Tell, and I throughly enjoyed it! I love the way J. C. Keough has written the character Laramie. I feel like Laramie is a dear friend, and we are having a girlfriends talk session and catching up. Laramie is the owner of a wonderful turn of the century home, known as the Madam. This is Halloween, so Laramie is throwing a costume party. Expect the unexpected and you won’t be disappointed!Great job! I am hooked and can’t wait to find out what Laramie does next.
Posted on Amazon Amazon
Biggs_bookshelf profile picture
Biggs_bookshelf
Amazon star 1Amazon star 2Amazon star 3Amazon star 4Amazon star 5Verified
The Blood Will Tell: A Laramie Harper Halloween Novella (The Laramie Harper Chronicles): Frightfully delightful Laramie is back in a short for her First Halloween in The Madam ( her home and business). After the recent murder that took place in her home, she hoping free wine and candy will draw in the community and help erase all the negativity it’s brought. All is going well until it’s not. You can’t help love Laramie and her heart of gold but chaos follows her where ever she goes. A great short story with a heartbreaking twist that takes place two weeks after book one Dying in Dallas. A quick read totally worth reading!!!

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